i watched this thing, and then wrote this thing, and im going to pitch it to the theater im ensembling at. anybody feel like reading it and giving feedback? i performed it last night on my table with action figures, and it was satisfactory.
What you call impossible, I call wait and see.
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, Jun 26 2015 04:32 PM
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Posted 26 June 2015 - 04:32 PM
you awaken in the intestinal tract of satan. you must defeat the hydra to escape. your only weapon is righteous anger.
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Posted 26 June 2015 - 07:23 PM
I fucking love it. Also, you're obligated to do it with action figures again, only record it this time.
Or, to put it more politely, "Neener neener."
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Posted 27 June 2015 - 07:46 PM
Or, to put it more politely, "Neener neener."
-all my friends that came with are drinking out in the car
--forever alone
+\- joke's on them i'm too drunk to drive
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Posted 28 June 2015 - 09:34 AM
There's a few grammatical errors, so if this is intended to be read by other people, you might want to read through and correct them. Regardless, your concept is awesome. It's very fun- and I agree with Lazlo. You should record this with action figures. :p
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Posted 29 June 2015 - 05:38 AM
just finished the rough draft, so maybe tonight i'll record it.
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Posted 07 July 2015 - 07:01 PM
second rough draft is in the bag. also shot the first act with lego guys who wouldn't stand up right. it's doodoo, but i'll put it up in docs and link it once it's uploaded.
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Posted 08 July 2015 - 09:37 AM
i want more
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Posted 12 September 2015 - 09:45 AM
I've added a lot to it in the past week or two. I showed it to people smarter than me, who know what they're doing, and applied their feedback to the story. now the wizards do other things, and the sellenites are robots. i think this is the most i'll be able to get out of the story without over diluting it with non source material.
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Posted 08 October 2015 - 04:52 PM
It's done, it's finally done. Just a few rewordings of things that don't make sense and it's done. i read it all in an hour, and that doesn't count stage directions, intermission, or the wrestling match the end. the next step is to gather actors for a live reading at this one studio that'll let us do readings there anytime, and then prepare to make the jump to full production next summer!
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Posted 14 December 2015 - 02:47 PM
This is getting its first group critique tonight! excited! if i can get this into the local theatre festival, i'm going to have to launch a kickstarter to buy all the fun stuff like bubble machines and blacklight tubes and art supplies to make backdrops with
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